Category: Writers Block
Truth
It is surreal
The feelings in the dreams I have
Where you and I are next to one another
I can't let them excape my brain
But to keep them captive isn't just
My heart's heavy when you're on my mind
I can't just let you go
Passionate kisses in the night
Just so your friends wouldn't know
I'm the black spot on your heart
Left to be nothing but just that
I'll never have you as my own
But I'll know that I've had the best of you
Meaningless hurtful words said out of rage doesn't make you bad (evil)
They're in the past to be put behind us
We've moved on, especially you
Just remember what they say
Never fuck someone you don't want to love.
10:41 pm
Nice, well done. This is a good poem. Good descriptions. s there a story behind those dreams that pursuaded you to write this poem? Wow, you did a good job. I like the way you wrote this poem. Nice job. The last phrase made it good. You wrote this poem to communicate your impression toward a situation. This poem also means hope because you mentioned about the posibilities of moving on. Keep on writing.